Thread:Jona19992/@comment-24217012-20170404061303/@comment-24217012-20170814140025

No, I don't like the sound of that.

Hm, what about:

(Max had fleed from the no winning battle. He thought that would happebln, eventually. He went inside an alley. He walks to the end of it and looks down. There was a canalisation system. His home. He drag the heavy iron away and looks into the pit of darkness. "Victory will be in our hands". He moves one of his feet forward, levitating through the hole as he makes a nother move and slips down the system. Black tentackles reach out from the pit and close the iron where it was)