Thread:Jona19992/@comment-24217012-20170404061303/@comment-24217012-20170813192703

After reading it again, I questioned myself what would be better - to see them know each other or to meet for the first time. (I am still thinking btw :P)

And that was a blast, how you made the story with the holliday's spirits. Hm, okay. Yeah, it was quite cool that scene when Belle talked to Mim. But also the scene where Jack, Mim and Hastur were chatting together - I thought Jack would be turned into a doll before and not after (but I kinda like the idea of protecting Mim).

Hm, to be a trainer (green girl) in the script? I think Sky would get allong with the idea.

Btw, the ending was cool, but still needs some fixing to do. I've wondered if in the ending scene there would be something, like: But in an alley, from the canalization, came black fog/ black sand / or even that someone was out there (an evil guy), and just making the people go: what will happen next? I love those scenes when you see a criminal or even a good guy staring or shortly doing something, and you think, what is going to happen? (It is like in those Marvel movies in the real end)