Thread:Cherrypop888/@comment-24852191-20150504221337/@comment-9337107-20150505215826

Here's what I've written about Lost Hope so far...

He sat there wondering, when will war end? He sat closer to the clock and he hoped some more. Hope Rider was his name and so he always thought positive and clear. Hope went to Grace's room and asked her the same question. Grace, a wonderful big sister to Hope said not to worry. Hope frowns and sits on her lap, "What will make me feel better?" He asked, Grace told Hope that when she was little and sad, she would whistle When You Wish Upon A Star and tap her feet, so Hope tried it. "It didn't work." Hope said and thought at the same time. Hope then heard a knock on the door and Grace went to catch it.

Grace's fiancée, Adam, was in front if the door carrying flowers and chocolates. Hope was disgusted. "We have a global war going on and he chooses to bring flowers at a time like this?" Hope thought. Grace accepted the gifts, but when she heard a gunshot, she pulled Adam inside.

So far this is what I've written, the character with a gun was originally going to very cruel (Like seriously cruel.) so I decided not to add him.